Sunday, July 24, 2011

Six Sentence Sunday - In The Eye

Back from the woods, and this week I bring you six from my newest release, a multicultural Torquere/BBA Menage 'Sip' called In The Eye.

So, In The Eye is an MMF short (around 9,000 words) about three bisexual storm chasers (and a dog), two of whom can't stand each other, crushes here and there, jealousy jealousy everywhere, trapped in a truck on a road trip through tornado alley. Doesn't that sound like the makings of a great erotic comedy? (Yes, it's a comedy)

Here's my six:

"Okay, I'll bite," Dale finally said. "Why are lesbians the chosen people?"

"Because the lowest incidence of HIV/AIDS is in the lesbian population. If AIDS is God's punishment, God must love dykes!"

"Lucky you," Xu said.

Susitna's hand rested on top of her puppy's head as her eyebrows furrowed. "What makes you think I'm a lesbian?"

hehehe...conversations that start like this always end well, right? Every time there's a lull or a joke and you think maybe just maybe they can all get along...*BOOM*

You can read the blurb/excerpt and buy this baby at All Romance or Amazon or Torquere Press.

Hugs,

Giselle

10 comments:

  1. omg totally fabulous! Only 9K? might hafta run buy this book - great six!

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  2. You guys are just plain awesome!
    Hugs,
    Giselle

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  3. OK, you have me on the epidemiology, and the dialogue is quick and clipped and clearly promises more.

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  4. Premise is excellent, and if this dialogue is any indication, you've nailed the comedy, too. Nice work.

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  5. lol! Love this for so many reasons. (One being the religious right's inanity!) Great six!

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  6. GREAT comeback! Can't wait to hear more.

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